Anyone willing to proofread a 2046 word essay?
bear grudges over the little things bear grudges over the little things
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- Im really sorry but I haven't the energy to proofread; I just wrote the law school test today and have two midterms upcoming...Im just tired lol. I would have any other time but sorry I cant be of help today. Good luck finding someone.
- UGHHH!! I had the entire thing proofed, but wordpad kept crashing. If you want me to proof it for you, I can do it over msn messenger or yahoo. Msn messenger = whenbothofourcarsollide@hotmail.com yahoo messenger = chrono_trigger_addict
- I started it, but I am so tired. I found a lot of mistakes so far though, and it's a bit hard because I don't know if I can rewrite sentences to make it sound clearer and It's hard to keep your style of writing if I do that. But here's the little that I have. And I was confused with the naming all of your family who came along part, if I were you I would of said it a different way or not mention everyone to begin with. But Good Luck. I was on vacation, in the American state of Florida, with not a care in the world, or that's what it should have been like, but with my crazy family that just wasn't a reality. It was a big family trip with me, my sister Elaine, her boyfriend Matt, my sister Yvonne, her fiance Steven, my nephew Leo, their son and my other two nephews Scott and Cooper, who live with me, my mum, dad, big brother Alan and little sister Rachel, who of course where all on the holiday as well. Yeah, there were a lot of us, and for there not to be one fight would be absurd, but I never expected it to stop and in the funny way that it did. There was a lot of tension before we had even gone on vacation. So yeah, we were off to a flying start. It was late September on a Saturday and day number 6 of the holiday. The day started out normal. We (NOTE: who is we? list the names instead of "we") hung around the villa for a while, waiting for Matt and my dad to come back from their morning golf. They went golfing everyday because it was so cheap; only about 70 dollars per 12 holes. When they came home, we had a discussion about what we would do during the day. We had already planned to go to the Old Town Kissimmee at night PS - Nevermind about the note about the We. I reread it again and realized it does fit! You could say "we all" or "everyone" though if you want.
