Out of 1-6 what would you give this?

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1. A solid 5. It is way too wordy and confusing and gives us way more information than we need to know about your story. Pax-C
2. sorry mate. don't wanna say what i thought of it but my advice is tell your teacher the dog ate it. it's the only way...
3. It doesn't have a good flow.. It's a good effort perhaps too much effort .. Its very long and seems to get stuck at parts.. I would say -- 5 but for the effort you have obviously put in maybe a 4 Best Of Luck Tomorrow... Please let us know what you scored
4. a three, you need to watch spelling, good story, last bit needs more consistency to story though.
5. I would score at 4 but the problems you have are as follows, examiners mark thousands of papers and when reading something it is the interest level which will determine a score beyond other factors. Try to be individual in your thinking and your vocabulary needs to be higher, quality and not quantity is also another important factor. Hope this helps.
6. My dear,Art & Literature happen to be beyond comparision or gradation.Being a teacher of English literature,more than 20 years,I can surely suggest some improvements.Your flippant and highly informal style of writing suggests that you are hardly in the habit of reading serious writings.The grammatical errors,though abounding,can be expected from a youngster of your age group.The choice of diction shows that you have gone for the very first words that came into your mind.To be descriptive and realistic is nothing bad,but when our own description goes astrey,how we can expect admiration from the readers.Sorry,I could not go for 1-6,but believe me,your writing did amuse me.There is a definite knack,and it has to be groomed with proper literary care and experience.Raja Sharma.Email: rajasirnepal@gmail.com If you want free books,pl. Visit http://www.rajasir.blogspot.com God bless you.
7. Well, it's messy and has alot of spelling errors but I found it highly entertaining to read. I have no idea what your teacher will think of it but I think you should get some credit for detail and for presenting it in a clearly individual voice. I'd have edited a bit I guess but you really did a good job of showing characters and evincing the tension we've all felt when trying to enjoy time with our families. Perhaps as a school piece it is imperfect but as a piece of creative writing it is really very good. Thanks for posting it. Good luck.
8. 6 I got bored and didn't finish. And believe me -- that's the kiss of death. ///